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Threw up some old poems on my page

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If anyone is interested.

 

http://www.philhanson.com/poetry

 

Links on right.

 

Hi (BTW, would you rather be called Phil or TAS?)

 

First off, I went to this page and thought that it was empty, because the main text on the page says "this page does not yet contain any content." I was able to get to your poems via the links the second time, but at first I thought the links hadn't been uploaded properly after reading that.

 

Anyway, I like Depression! Or I guess I should say "your free-verse poem named Depression" so people don't just think I'm being goth. :) I like the way that you don't simply say "woe is me" but paint an evocative picture with the visual imagery. Great job!

 

(I'm not a big fan of Haiku in general, so I'm afraid I'm not the audience for that one).

 

Thanks for sharing,

Orren

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Orren hates Haiku?

But he enjoys the free verse.

A true puzzlement.

 

(BTW, would you rather be called Phil or TAS?)

Given his Script Frenzy productivity, we call him MR. HANSON.

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Orren hates Haiku?

But he enjoys the free verse.

A true puzzlement.

 

Thoth pontificates

On software forum of blue

A willow tree cries

 

Orren

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Thoth pontificates

On software forum of blue

A willow tree cries

:)

Yeah. Now that's the stuff!

 

- Pope Thoth.

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