thealtruismsociety Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 If anyone is interested. http://www.philhanson.com/poetry Links on right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve E Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Storyist novels burn like hot ash in my mind blossom fresh and green - Thoth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orrenm Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 If anyone is interested. http://www.philhanson.com/poetry Links on right. Hi (BTW, would you rather be called Phil or TAS?) First off, I went to this page and thought that it was empty, because the main text on the page says "this page does not yet contain any content." I was able to get to your poems via the links the second time, but at first I thought the links hadn't been uploaded properly after reading that. Anyway, I like Depression! Or I guess I should say "your free-verse poem named Depression" so people don't just think I'm being goth. I like the way that you don't simply say "woe is me" but paint an evocative picture with the visual imagery. Great job! (I'm not a big fan of Haiku in general, so I'm afraid I'm not the audience for that one). Thanks for sharing, Orren Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve E Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Orren hates Haiku? But he enjoys the free verse. A true puzzlement. (BTW, would you rather be called Phil or TAS?) Given his Script Frenzy productivity, we call him MR. HANSON. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orrenm Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Orren hates Haiku?But he enjoys the free verse. A true puzzlement. Thoth pontificates On software forum of blue A willow tree cries Orren Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve E Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Thoth pontificatesOn software forum of blue A willow tree cries Yeah. Now that's the stuff! - Pope Thoth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thealtruismsociety Posted April 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Either is fine. Yeah I havnt built the main poem page, hehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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